Um, I'm not sure that's remotely appropriate. There are several messages in your poem (did you not see the post about poetry).
I take issue with several of them:
1. The dancing alligator is amazingly annoying.
2. Child abuse was the topic, ignoring that completely makes it seem that you just want to put a link on my site to your site. That's not so nice, unless you are going to pay me for your advert space. Otherwise have something either topical or pertinent to say. Or at least not pseudo poetry.
3. Um, what common culture of your youth? There never was a common culture here or anywhere else. As long as there is a disparity of wealth and class, there will not be a common culture. Yeah, that's a downer, but reality, and I find your statements thinly veiled racism, to which I take offense. Let's not blame your racism on the internet.
4. I don't have an "encyclopedic/omniscient Designer/Architect." I have me, making a blog, while trying to slog through this life. There ain't nothing holdin up my strings, or I'd be a lot happier, I guarantee. But you can't tell me child abuse, rotten parents, poverty and me pulling myself outta all of that is the result of anything but the choices I have made. They were often painful and have caused me to doubt my path, but I persevere because of my sticktoitiveness (thanks E.B.) which will forever rise above what you use as an excuse to do what you want because you can just ask forgiveness. I live in the real world where there are consequences for one's actions.
5. To sum, don't use me, there is no God (stated respectfully, oh, great sandwich!), that alligator is annoying, and you're a racist (odd in light of your first poem, spouting that people are so very different, but I guess you were being funny?). And some really bad timing, Howdy. I'm in the mood for bruisin and you just stepped in my path. Please go away
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Um, I'm not sure that's remotely appropriate. There are several messages in your poem (did you not see the post about poetry).
I take issue with several of them:
1. The dancing alligator is amazingly annoying.
2. Child abuse was the topic, ignoring that completely makes it seem that you just want to put a link on my site to your site. That's not so nice, unless you are going to pay me for your advert space. Otherwise have something either topical or pertinent to say. Or at least not pseudo poetry.
3. Um, what common culture of your youth? There never was a common culture here or anywhere else. As long as there is a disparity of wealth and class, there will not be a common culture. Yeah, that's a downer, but reality, and I find your statements thinly veiled racism, to which I take offense. Let's not blame your racism on the internet.
4. I don't have an "encyclopedic/omniscient Designer/Architect." I have me, making a blog, while trying to slog through this life. There ain't nothing holdin up my strings, or I'd be a lot happier, I guarantee. But you can't tell me child abuse, rotten parents, poverty and me pulling myself outta all of that is the result of anything but the choices I have made. They were often painful and have caused me to doubt my path, but I persevere because of my sticktoitiveness (thanks E.B.) which will forever rise above what you use as an excuse to do what you want because you can just ask forgiveness. I live in the real world where there are consequences for one's actions.
5. To sum, don't use me, there is no God (stated respectfully, oh, great sandwich!), that alligator is annoying, and you're a racist (odd in light of your first poem, spouting that people are so very different, but I guess you were being funny?). And some really bad timing, Howdy. I'm in the mood for bruisin and you just stepped in my path. Please go away
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